Here are some snippets of writing produced this morning during Reflect, Relate, Retell. The work our campers have been putting in this summer is evident in the increased length and quality of the writing being produced. Enjoy!
A long time ago, the dinosaurs were destroyed by an asteroid. Until today, under the sea was Aqua man. In the USA, lived Captain America. In Gotham city, was Batman, and in Kansas City was Superman. The superheroes formed a team called The Perfect Four. This is their story. In 1998, while Superman was high in the sky, he saw the forms of mutant dinosaurs. He reported what he saw so Aqua man went to check it out. But, something attacked him from behind while he was checking, and no one could find him. In the meantime, Captain America and Batman were fighting the dinosaurs while Superman looked for Aqua man. But, a creature with kryptonite attacked Superman and he vanished. What will happen next? To be continued... -Nathanael
The Dark Forest
One day Sumo Mouse was just sitting in his lab waiting for someone to call for help. He waited for four hours for someone to call for help. Then, someone called for help in the dark forest. Sumo Mouse was scared to go into that forest because there were some people who died in there. Also, the plants in that forest came alive. The plants have killed some people that went into the forest too. So, one kid wandered in to the dark forest and fell and hit his head! Sumo Mouse was flying over top of the trees and saw the kid. He swooped down, but when he was going down he got caught on a branch and he ripped his cape. Once his cape ripped, he fell on the kid. The kid woke up and screamed. The kid's scream was so loud that all of the plants came alive, attacking Sumo Mouse and the kid. Sumo Mouse was so lucky to have a laser with him so he used the laser to fight off the plants. But, it was not strong enough to kill the plants so Sumo Mouse and the boy ran and ran and ran and ran. But, they could not find their way out and then Sumo Mouse forgot he could not fly. So, Sumo Mouse had to find a leaf or something strong to cover the rip in his cape. So, they went looking for something and they found a strong leaf. But, there was nothing to stick it to his cape with. Sumo Mouse remembered he had tape for emergencies. So, they taped it and began flying out of the dark forest and Sumo Mouse took the kid to his mom. So, Sumo Mouse and the kid lived happily ever after. The End. -Madison
One time Super Mouse went to Chile for an undercover mission. His mission was to stop the bad guys stealing from the shops. When he got there, he found the place and fought until Super Mouse slapped him in the fave and the bad guys ran away and his mission was done. So, he went home and he ate a snack and when to bed. When he woke up the next morning, he had another mission. It was in Mexico. The bad guys were stealing the king's crown so he ran away with the crown. He got a net and caught the bad guys and Super Mouse gave the crown back to the king. His other mission was done. He had to go to Haiti next to save the day there as well. -Kai
I think that a team of super villains is better. Here is what I came up with: Catwoman, Cheetah, Poison Ivy, and Harley Quinn. Here's the story of how they met...
One night in Gotham City the Gotham City bank had been refilled with $1,000,000 on the news. Scientist Barbara Ann Minerva was watching on her hotel T.V. She decided to take a break from Washington, D.C. crime and rented a hotel in Gotham City. After hearing the news, she turned into her villainous ego, Cheetah. In her cat form, Cheetah ran towards the bank, her tail flicking about excitedly. To her surprise, three other people were already there. One was dressed as a black cat, another wore a jump-suit made of poison ivy, and the third one wore a black and red jester costume. As Cheetah dashed in, she realized the 3 people were all women! Suddenly, guards came in. The four villains whispered to each other as two men stood guard. "What do we do now?" asked Poison Ivy. "Wait, I have a plan," said Cheetah. After reviewing the plan, the girls spring into action. Cheetah bit into the rope they were tied up in, and it ripped apart, freeing them. Then, they ran from the building. "You rocked, even though we didn't get the money. We made a pretty god team." All the villains agreed. -Alexis
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