Today one of our young junior friends, Colton, composed these sentences during differentiated writing. Great job Colton! Keep up the great work.
Tomorrow, I'm going to my pool. I will go for a ride on my dad's motorcycle. I will be tired afterwards so I will go to bed.
I'm going to Brampton on the motorcycle tomorrow. When I get home I will play outside.
I went in my pool. My baby cousin was in it. I splashed him, and then my dad came and drove me back home on his motorcycle.
I get to go to the gas station and then to the mall on his motorcycle.
I get to go swimming in my pool today. I am also going to play on my PS3 and I'm getting a new phone - the iPhone 4.
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